我会先将主线马卡洛夫有关的任务完结后，才会考虑其他，可以建议，但是我会适当按照进度，来考虑💤

历史结构混乱，抛开这些勉强能看

到处都是重复的内容还前言不搭后语纯粹就是凑字数的

看了一章，嘿嘿又忍着看了3章，这样说吧，4章合并一章实际剧情只有10%其他全废话，这是写的什么？？？有必要这样水？？？

话说古代粮食都不够吃要开垦田地，你这还劝从商，到时候饿死一半

怎么和“神话之地球掌控者”相似？？

麻辣个榴莲，收藏榜里不是扮演就是心声，还看毛

如果是增加特性，我想问一下要不要给腮鱼龙加一个强壮之颚的特性，感觉蛮适合他的，圆鲨也是，他们俩都对咬人脑袋情有独钟，还有，龙颚这种增加龙属性攻击50%威力的特性也不错，小智手下龙系也不少，快龙，腮鱼龙，圆鲨，黏美龙，音波龙，四颚针龙，都是龙族豪强

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作者快更不要停，我把💏💏的花都给你

直男是直男，铁憨憨是铁憨憨，你这男主一看就是个铁憨憨

尿频尿急尿不尽啊，时不时一抖来一滴

第90章的时候，这本书就废了🍛

一个打耳光大赛写特么七八章🍅顶着钢筋往前走🍅不会写就不要写好不好🍅不会手接过来掰弯拧麻花嘛🍅装逼情节都写不好写什么爽文啊🍅🍅

出包王女建议看了12章再看后边的，12章现在在审核🐬

i探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探探

每卷的结尾都是草草了解然后在穿，也不介绍那些女主哪去了，无语

螺旋丸b级，豪火球a级？这等级写的真搞笑

愤怒，悲伤，等负面情绪？这不得来个坎骑

大宋过后.去泰山封禅就是一种侮辱了🐁宋朝去泰山封禅的皇帝是什么德性？而大明时候去封的话，那么就代表你只能排在他的后面🐁